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Đề ngày 10/2/2018: Family reunion

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Đề thi thật ngày 10/02/2018

The tradition that a family gets together to eat meals is disappearing.

What are the reasons and what are the impacts?

Write at least 250 words 

Nộp bài writing task 2

Sample answer

It is a fact that the tradition of family members having meals together is gradually fading away due to the prioritisation of career development. The disappearance of this custom might have several unwanted influences on people, especially young generations.

The gradual unavailability of the family reunion can be attributed to being busy with work or study to improve career prospects. It is clear that the world of employment takes most of the time in a day of adults and for adolescents, it is studying activities that they invest their time in the most. As a result, the more people prioritise work and study, the less they try to make time for having lunch or dinner together. Also, since all family members are busy with different personal schedules, it is very hard to have a certain time period in which people are all free to enjoy meals together. This explains why the busy life nowadays is slowly erasing the tradition of family reunion during mealtime.

Consequently, there are undesirable effects caused by this social phenomenon. First and foremost, the disappearance of this family tradition would widen the gap between old and young generations within a family. Having meals and talking to each other would be a great family bonding time, in which children could get along well with their parents or grandparents. So, no more family time means more potential misunderstanding and distance between each family member. Second, having nothing in common within a family would negatively change people's perspectives about kinship, in which they will have little appreciation for their family members. This would lead to the fact that more and more senior people nowadays are sent to nursing homes rather than being taken care of at home by their own children.

In conclusion, the matter of career development is regarded as the most common reason why family members spend less time having meals with one another. There are negative impacts arising as a result including the more generation gap and reduced kinship.     

Word count: 336 words

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