How does evidence apply to title thesis? Concept introduced on 1st slide but different ideas elaborated on and supported through the rest. Tie these together.

Slight grammatical errors: open quotation on 4th slide, double negative (, & run on sentence.

Explain concepts more clearly before utilizing them in argument for reader’s purpose. Consider audience.

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4 Responses to #FreeArnas


  2. I believe that the concept adopted as a basis should be reflected in all stages of work so that everyone can easily follow it.

  3. The explained concepts were not disclosed properly, so I would not be able to comprehend the overall issue.


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