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Rose Tremain (2010) – Trespass

Monday, November 29th, 2010

The first chapter of Trespass is a tour-de-force evocation of the world as seen through the eyes of Mélodie, a nearly distraught ten-year old girl who has recently moved from cosmopolitan Paris to the wilds of the Cévennes (a mountainous region of southeast France).  This chapter sets a standard that is never again achieved in the novel.  Tremain seems to have something of a fascination with the inner lives of hypersensitive children who are obsessed with animals, especially bugs.  A minor character in her Music & Silence has a similar fascination with and even mystical connection with such beasties.  Mélodie has no mystical connection with bugs.  She just finds them upsetting.  What Mélodie finds when she runs away by herself from a school class outing is more than upsetting.  We leave Mélodie screaming her head off.

In the second chapter, we meet Anthony Verey, a London dealer in antique furnishings, a man who loves only things.  His beloveds are his personal favorite pieces, which he pretends (to his clients, but not to himself) are for sale.  At the age of sixty-four, he is struck by the sudden realization that you really cant take it with younot even the smallest piece of thread from his beloved Louis XV Aubusson tapestry.  Anthony, the omniscient third-person narrator tells us is a man who at the height of his celebrity [had] been able to lull himself to sleep by countingone by delectable onethe people who envied him.  (p.10)  Had been is the operative thought.  His celebrity, his wealth, his status, are all in the past.  He is now a has been.

He found himself admitting … that the envy of others .. had really and honestly been the thing that kept him alive.  This was an outrageous realization, but a true one.  (p.12)

The third chapter introduces Audrun Lunel, also age sixty-four, a woman who is immediately presented to us as defective.  She knew she was often confused.  (p.13)  People told her this.  Friends, doctors, even the priest, they all said it….  And they were right.  There were moments when consciousness or existence … faltered.  (p.13)  She has episodes of what we would call petit mal epilepsy in which she loses consciousness and later regains it with no memory of what has transpired in the interim.  Add to this a childhood in which her brother, Aramon, had convinced her that she was adopted, the biological daughter of a woman who collaborated with an SS man during the Nazi occupation.  Add further the fact that after the death of her mother, who was indeed Aramons mother as well, her father and her brother begin to sexually abuse her asget thisa substitute for her deceased mother.

Audrun is, the narrator tells us, obsessed with the fear of trespass, the word that gives the book its title, motivates its central event, and recurs in various forms throughout the story.  Audruns mother whispered to her long ago:

Strangers can come.  And others who may not be strangers.  Anything that has existence can be stolen or destroyed.  So you must be vigilant.  (p.15)

And now, her brother, Aramon, comes to her begging her to help him, for he is confused in his own way.  Initially we think it is the result of alcoholism, but it seems to be the same kind of petit mal epilepsy that afflicts Audrun.

In the fourth chapter, another trespass is conceived, this time by Anthony Verey.  In his depression over his dwindling wealth, status, and joie-de-vivre, he decides that his (three years) older sister V (for Veronica) will have to rescue him.

Anthony is mostly gay, although he thinks himself bisexual and was married for a bit.  His sister, Veronica, is lesbian, living in France, in the Cévennes, with her lover Kitty Meadows.  What a prosaic name.  Her character does not disappoint on prosaicness.  The author tries hard, I think, to like Kitty, but ends up portraying her in a rather poor light.  Veronica and Kitty are, as the French see them, typical English expatriates, but the women hadnt thought about it, until they found themselves objects of derision, sneered at as putains de rosbif [roast beef whores] by a group of youths (p.28) in a local café.

Veronica announces to Kitty that Anthony is in trouble and wants to come and stay with [them].  Just for a while.  (p.31)  Famous last words.  Kitty has Anthonys number. 

Anthony …. had always struck her as a man for whom everything was already clear, already decided, judged, categorised and appropriately filed and labeled.  What more, in a life as apparently selfish as his, was there left to understand?  (p.32)

The feeling between Anthony and Kitty is mutual.  He wants V all to himself and Veronica feels an older sibling responsibility for Anthony, which may have made sense during their childhood and adolescence, but now that he is sixty-four and she is sixty-seven, it is an atavism that should have long since evolved into something more even handed.

Kitty worries.  She looks for reassurance.  She lays her head in Veronicas lap and the closest she can come to broaching her concern about what Anthonys arrival will mean for her and Veronicas relationship is to ask Veronica, Stroke my hair, darling, will you?  (p.49)  Veronica makes a less than half-hearted attempt to comply and the narrator tells us all we need to know about the future of their relationship.  Actually, your hair is quite difficult to stroke.  (p.49)  Bam!  So much for that, the rest is (about to become, at tedious length) history.

On a second reading, I began to wonder if Veronica was dealing from a full deck.  What is one to make of this exchange between Anthony and Veronica?

I hate women, he said to Veronica one night.  I hate every single woman in the world, except you.

Im not a woman, said Veronica.  Im a horse.

Three sets of characters in the first few chapters.  We know they will all collide eventually.

One cant take seriously Anthonys fabulously rich friends the Palmers, Lloyd and Benita.  They are, however the occasion of a delightful spate of rich and imaginative imagery combined with amusingly trenchant observations of human nature.  Comic relief, in other words.  Anthony dines with them the night before he takes off to inflict himself on Kitty and Veronica.  We see Lloyd Palmer with his large but still handsome wife like a sequined spinnaker beside him.  (p. 40)  And now, Anthony had drunk a great deal of Lloyds excellent wine.  Lloyd had matched him, sip for sip, and the two of them now sat face to face, across a choppy lake of glassware.  (p.40). 

The two men determine as Lloyd has touchingly put it, to get to the heart of the whole ruddy thing.   Palmers wife had gone to bed.  She had read and understood both Ibsen and Lewis Carroll and knew that there was no heart of the whole ruddy thing and that when men talked about searching for it, what they often wound up talking about was cars.  (p.40) 

Anthony tells Lloyd about  the only … time in his life he was happy.  (p.40)  It turns out to be when Anthony gave a tea party for his mother in a tree house.  Lloyd observes to himself that Time was getting to everybody of his generation now….  But it was getting to Anthony in a satisfyingly lethal way.  (p.42)  The tea party story is interrupted when Lloyd excuses himself to go to the bathroom, but he reassures Anthony,  I want to hear the dénouement!  Truly I do….  This is as gripping as Winnie-the-Pooh.   (p.42) 

There is a crack in the façade of the Mas Lunel, the ancestral home of Audrun and Aramon in which Aramon is now living, Audrun having been relegated to a small bungalow nearby.  Audrun knows the crack is structural, and she worries about it, but no one cares.  Not Aramon, not the real estate agent, not the stonemason Aramon hires to hide the crack.  What is important to Aramon is to sell the house to a foreigner for half a million euros, so he can live in clover for the rest of [his] days, (p.38) whatever that means.

To Kittys horror, Anthony announces he is going to stay in France and the third person omniscient narrator with access to Anthonys thoughts tells us, Anthony sighed.  After hed moved down here, hed find a new partner for his sister.  (p. 60)   Anthonys plan to relocate to the Cévennes fires his imagination and he evinces a manic pleasure in imagining how he will recreate his former celebrity by settling himself in some expensively restored, immaculately furnished house.  I think I liked him better when he was depressed, and I didnt like him much then, either.

Aramon accuses Audrun of a kind of trespass.  He says Audrun built her bungalow over the boundary of his land and he will be within his rights to tear it down to improve the salability of the Mas Lunel. 

One doesnt read this book for the pleasure of spending time with the main characters: Anthony, Audrun, Aramon, Veronica, and Kitty.  They are all disturbing, pathetic, annoying, or some combination of these.  That Tremain manages to breathe life into them and make them psychologically convincing is an accomplishment, but hardly one that would make one clamor for an encore.

Three minor characters are exceptions: the VialasMarianne and Jeanne (mother and daughter), both friends of Audrun and Jeanne is Mélodies sympathetic teacher; and the stonemason Raoul Molezon, who once courted Audrun and later saves her life at great danger to his own. 

So whats left?  Consider the book as a murder mystery.  A modern murder mystery, to be sure.  It has the requisite dead body found in the first chapter and the murder is revealed to the reader (albeit by the omniscient third person narrator) after suitable red herrings and complications.  For quite a while, we dont even know who the victim was, and at the end we are left to ask if in any sense justice was done.  In a traditional murder mystery, theres someone who gets a bee in his or her bonnet and who becomes obsessed with exposing the crime and the criminal no matter what.  In Trespass, theres no detective, self-appointed or not (well, theres a local police investigator, but hes in and out of the story in a chapter or two).  The police are pretty much irrelevant.  Theres not much investigation.  We already know everything the police will find our before the police arrive on the scene and we know, by being privy to the murderers thoughts, things the police never discover.

Although the murder mystery is the only thing that justifies bringing this cast of characters together in a single novel, none of the dust jacket blurbs even mentions the words murder or mystery.  Two of them call the work a thriller, but thats a rather weak catch-all. 

Audrun gets away with Anthonys murder, but remarkably the identity of the victim is of no concern to her.  Thus, her crime is worse (if there may be said to be comparatives of evil) than if it had been a crime of passion directed at Anthony personally.  Nonetheless, the murder is a crime of passion directed against Aramon. Anthonys murder is no more than a means to Audruns desired end, revenge against Aramon, and Aramons oddly Zen acceptance of life in prison calls into question whether Audrun in fact gets satisfaction from her revenge.

At the end, weve been through a story about a bunch of characters with profound, but curiously unmoving psychological problems and I, for one, was pleased to see the last of them.

Willa Cather (1918)  My Antonia

Thursday, November 11th, 2010

There is an elaborate hall-of-mirrors here. The text is encapsulated in three levels of indirection. This is a book written by Cather, a woman. The Introduction purports to have been written by a womana writer who lives in New York and who, as a little girl, knew the eponymous Antonia Cuzak (nee Shimerda). The narrator tells us that the main text was written by a man, an old friend, Jim Burden, who grew up in the same Nebraska town and that she and Burden both admired Antonia. It was a friendship that meant a great deal to him and the narrator recalls all her old affection for her. The narrator and Jim made a pact to write their separate remembrances of Antonia, but only Jim actually did so. Apparently with some sadness, the narrator declares at the end of the Introduction

My own story was never written  the following narrative is Jims  substantially as he brought it to me. (p.xii)

We never hear from the narrator again. Why was her story never written? We never learn. All we see is this tantalizing glimpse of regret. The word substantially would imply that the narrator actually made some changes to the text before publishing it, but we dont know what they were, or why. And we never learn the identity of the narrator, who by implication may well be one of the characters in Jims narrative.

It is as odd an introduction as I can remember in any other work. It suggests that something about the story and its associations were fraught for the author, and compelled her (as far as an author may be said to be compelled by the process of writing) to flirt with those issues by distant implication and to leave their explication unresolved and hanging over her readers for all time. It sets a misty, almost mythical tone for the solid and generally unmysterious narrative that is the majority of the text.

Who is Antonia? We have no direct access to Antonias thoughts and feelings. Everything is hearsay. We learn only what Jim Burden chooses to tell us (subject, of course, to whatever the narrator of the Introduction has altered). And what Jim has chosen to record is as much an indication of who he is as of who Antonia is.

And whose Antonia is she, anyway? Jim lays claim to her when he gives his manuscript the title My Antonia. Antonias father refers to her that way when he begs Jims grandmother to teach her to read and write, but he doesnt refer to Yulka that way when he shows Jim and his Grandmother the little hole in which Yulka and Antonia sleep. Yulka; my Antonia, he says. Jim notices. Later, after Mr. Shimerdas death, Jim recalls that he

Mused to think of the tone in which Mr. Shimerda, who could say so little, yet managed to say so much when he exclaimed, My Antonia! (p.91)

Mrs. Steavens, when she tells Jim the story of Antonias marriage disaster calls her My Antonia that had so much good in her. And later, the town photographer identifies a picture saying, Thats Tony Shimerdas baby. You remember her; she used to be the Harlings Tony. But ultimately, it is Jims AntoniaAntonia as he interprets herthat we come to know.

At the same time, this is very much Jims story, the story of an intelligent and sensitive boy who, at the age of ten was smitten by an intelligent and sensitive girl four years his senior; and the vicissitudes of that relationship as it is battered, nearly beyond recognition, by the realities of life. The four-year difference between them looms large in their eyes and, but not so large as to prevent them from developing a deep bond.

But a single incidentthe apparent suicide of Antonias fatherbegins to separate them intellectually, and over the next three years they slowly and inexorably begin to separate emotionally as well. After the death of her father, Antonias brother Ambrosch is thrust into the role of family provider, a role that had been rather ineffectually played by their father. Antonia is correspondingly thrust into Ambroshs former role: that of the eldest son. No longer can the Shimerdas afford the luxurya luxury her father would have favoredof Antonia obtaining a serious education. Antonia coarsens and an unsympathetic Jim reports.

Everything was disagreeable to me. Antonia ate so noisily now, like a man, and she yawned often at the table and kept stretching her arms over her head as if they ached. Grandmother had said, Heavy field workll spoil that girl. Shell lose all her nice ways and get rough ones. She had lost them already. (p.91)

Jim resents what he perceives as Antonias indifference. But his grandfathera remarkably sensitive and pragmatic manasks Antonia to come over and help Jims grandmother in the kitchen, ostensibly as a way to earn a little money. Jim discovers that, away from the tensions of her family, Antonia still contains her former self.

‘I like your grandmother, and all things here,’ she sighed. ‘I wish my papa live to see this summer. I wish no winter ever come again.’

‘It will be summer a long while yet,’ I reassured her. ‘Why aren’t you always nice like this, Tony?’

‘How nice?’

‘Why, just like this; like yourself. Why do you all the time try to be like Ambrosch?’

She put her arms under her head and lay back, looking up at the sky. ‘If I live here, like you, that is different. Things will be easy for you. But they will be hard for us.’ (p.101)

When Jim is thirteen or fourteen, Jims grandparents move from their farm to a house in town. Jim still has a crush on Antonia, but the four years separating their ages are still something of a problem, at least (by Jims report) in the eyes of those whose tongues wag maliciously because in high school he spends time with Antonia and her friends rather than Girls His Own Age. Ah, high school. I remember the scandalous tint that colored reports of High School Girls dating College Men (admittedly, an age difference in the other direction). As a junior in high school, I was rebuffed by a senior girl whom I asked to a dance. Whether it was true or not, what she told me (which would have stood up as a valid excuse in the court of high school social law) was that she didn’t date below her grade.

It is clear by this point, that as a practical matter Jim and Antonia are growing farther and farther apart socially and intellectually. Whatever hopes the reader may have had of Jim and Antonia marrying to settle down on a farm and raise a family are now just wishful thinking. They are still friends, but Antonia is being courted by Larry Donovan and Jim, who plans to go to college, is not ready for marriage and knows it enough to settle for carping about how Larry Donovan is not right for her. We later discover just how right Jim was, but there is no satisfaction for Jim in knowing that his assessment was correct.

Eventually, after the peculiar episode of Mr. Cutter (about which, more, later), Jim breaks with Antonia. He goes east, she goes west (at least for the duration of her not-to-be marriage). On a visit home, he visits her briefly and finds that they both still have fond, unspoiled memories of their relationship.

‘I’ll come back,’ I said earnestly, through the soft, intrusive darkness.

‘Perhaps you will’I felt rather than saw her smile. ‘But even if you don’t, you’re here, like my father. So I won’t be lonesome.’


But it is twenty years before Jim is able to returnemotionally able, that is, because as we know from the Introduction he has prospered and travels widely for his work. His explanation to the reader is that, life intervened. When he visits her they are now fully separate individuals with fully separate lives. They have the knowledge of what they were to one another and the satisfaction of knowing it to be a treasure that they both share and cherish

So, My Antonia is a coming-of-age story and it is Jim Burden who comes of age and it is precisely because he has finally come of age that he is able to draw for us the picture of Antonias coming of age. And somewhere in all of this is Willa Cather, who thought this book was her best work and perhaps it was also part of her own coming of age.

Three Puzzles

1) Did Antonias father really commit suicide or did Krajiek murder him? The preponderance of the evidence supports a finding of suicide, but the alternative is not definitively ruled out.

2) Why was Jim so angry with Antonia after Cutters sneak attack, which obviously was intended as rape against Antonia? Jim took a beating when Cutter discovered Jim where Cutter had taken for granted he would find Antonia. Surely Jim didnt think Antonia had known in advance what Cutter planned. Did Cutter in his fury manage to subdue Jim and sodomize him? I dont think the text supports such a surmise. The best I can come up with (and I cant say I find myself fully persuasive) is that Jim was already upset with Antonia for hanging out with Larry Donovan and Jim was further upset by what he might see as Antonias naïve decision to work for and live with the Cutters. Add to those upsets the trauma of Cutters attack and the full force of that emotional turmoil gets displaced into anger directed at the element common to all three, viz. Antonia. As I say, Im not convinced. Any ideas?

3) Is Jim a sexually underdeveloped individual? My vote is no. Remember the context of Jims narrative. He writes it to share with his friend, the narrator of the Introduction. His sexuality is not (particularly in 1918 when the book was published) an aspect of his life one would expect him to share to voluble excess, as has become something of a fad over the past fifty years. What he chooses to share is significantly shaped by how his behavior will be seen and judged by those who read his manuscript. Accordingly, Jim is coy about his sexual attractions to, and experiences with, women, but he reveals enough to let us find between the lines an apparently healthy, heterosexual libido.

He shares with us an (apparently self-censored) account of his high school fantasies about Lena.

One dream I dreamed a great many times, and it was always the same. I was in a harvest-field full of shocks, and I was lying against one of them. Lena Lingard came across the stubble barefoot, in a short skirt, with a curved reaping-hook in her hand, and she was flushed like the dawn, with a kind of luminous rosiness all about her. She sat down beside me, turned to me with a soft sigh and said, ‘Now they are all gone, and I can kiss you as much as I like.’

I used to wish I could have this flattering dream about Antonia, but I never did. (pp.166-167)

He tells us of a time he kissed Antonia.

One evening when Donovan was out on his run, Antonia came to the hall…, and that night I took her home. When we were in the Cutters’ yard … I told her she must kiss me good night.

‘Why, sure, Jim.’ A moment later she drew her face away and whispered indignantly, ‘Why, Jim! You know you ain’t right to kiss me like that. I’ll tell your grandmother on you!’

‘Lena Lingard lets me kiss her,’ I retorted, ‘and I’m not half as fond of her as I am of you.’

‘Lena does?’ Tony gasped. ‘If she’s up to any of her nonsense with you, I’ll scratch her eyes out!’ (p.165)

So, Jim knows how to kiss like that, which takes at least a modicum of enthusiastic practice.

When Jim reports that at college in Lincoln he took up (again) with Lena, he is at pains to spin his relationship with her as prim and proper. Thus, his exchange with Ordinsky, the violinist who lives across the hall from Lena and has been keeping a suspicious eye on Jim.

‘Kindness of heart,… sentiment, are not understood in a place like this…. Grinning college boys, ignorant and conceited, what do they know of delicacy!’

I controlled my features and tried to speak seriously.

‘If you mean me, Mr. Ordinsky, I have known Miss Lingard a long time, and I think I appreciate her kindness. We come from the same town, and we grew up together.’

His gaze travelled slowly down from the ceiling and rested on me. ‘Am I to understand that you have this young woman’s interests at heart? That you do not wish to compromise her?’

‘That’s a word we don’t use much here, Mr. Ordinsky. A girl who makes her own living can ask a college boy to supper without being talked about. We take some things for granted.’

‘Then I have misjudged you, and I ask your pardon’–he bowed gravely. ‘Miss Lingard,’ he went on, ‘is an absolutely trustful heart. She has not learned the hard lessons of life. As for you and me, noblesse oblige’–he watched me narrowly….

After that Ordinsky was friendly to me, and behaved as if there were some deep understanding between us. (pp.209-210)

What with Jim declaring that he was controlling his features and trying to speak seriously, and Jims later admission that his relationship with Lena worked so much to the detriment of his studies that he decided he had to leave, I think we can rule out the possibility that their relationship was chaste or Platonic. Im not saying that Jim was (in the phrase popularized by Saturday Night Live of yore) a wild and crazy guy, but we can rule out prissy asceticism.

The Text

Cather is at her best when describing small, relatively circumscribed scenes.

grandmother and I talked about my journey, and about the arrival of the new Bohemian family. (p.7)

[Fuchs] got out his best cowboy boots, with tops stitched in bold design–roses, and true-lover’s knots, and undraped female figures. These, he solemnly explained, were angels. (p.8)

Occasionally one of the horses would tear off with his teeth a plant full of blossoms, and walk along munching it, the flowers nodding in time to his bites as he ate down toward them. (p.13)

I find, however, that she gets into trouble when she tries to create broad brush similes and metaphors. All too often, they seem to barely graze their targets or miss altogether. Consider this description of Jims first impressions of Antonias father:

I noticed how white and well-shaped his own hands were. They looked calm, somehow, and skilled. His eyes were melancholy, and were set back deep under his brow. His face was ruggedly formed, but it looked like ashes–like something from which all the warmth and light had died out. (pp.16-17, emphasis added)

Everything goes well until the ashes simile. The problem is that she writes that his face looked like ashes, which is a visual image, but she has to explain that what she means is that it looked like cold ashes, but ashes look the same whether they are cold or hot, so the simile just ends up a muddle.

It happens, too, when she tries to capture the grand sweep of the prairie landscape as it appeared to Jim in his first experiences.

MThe light air about me told me that the world ended here: only the ground and sun and sky were left, and if one went a little farther there would be only sun and sky, and one would float off into them, like the tawny hawks which sailed over our heads making slow shadows on the grass. (p.10)

Ive been a boy of ten faced with the grandeurs of nature. I was about that age the first time my parents took me to Yosemite National Park. Ill never forget the experience, but I find it hard to think that under any circumstances I would have (even metaphorically) thought that the world ended there or just beyond there. The only thing that saves this paragraph is Cathers return to detail at the end: the exquisite evocation of soaring hawks above linked to the earth below by their shadows. Now, consider her description of sundown on the prairie:

As far as we could see, the miles of copper-red grass were drenched in sunlight that was stronger and fiercer than at any other time of the day. The blond cornfields were red gold, the haystacks turned rosy and threw long shadows. The whole prairie was like the bush that burned with fire and was not consumed. That hour always had the exultation of victory, of triumphant ending, like a hero’s death–heroes who died young and gloriously. It was a sudden transfiguration, a lifting-up of day. (pp.29-30)

To my mind, this excerpt begins to go wrong with the introduction of the burning bush. Burning conjures up smoke and fire, but there is none of that here. Then, she goes off the deep end into exultations of victory then a heros death, then young heroes dieing gloriously, and finally a transfiguration glossed as a lifting-up. Its not that I am opposed to eloquent and enthusiastic similes. I am always in awe and admiration when presented with a good simile. But a simile that immediately requires an explanationor a metaphor inexplicably arrived atarrests the flow of ones thoughts and it takes some effort to recover.

All told, though, My Antonia is a pleasure to read, one of the high points of American literature.