Reviews for Spirit of the Veela
Nayami-Chan chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
for some odd reason I failed to realize that this fic wasn't completed when I clicked it and decided to read it... I highly enjoy reading this fic its really good and I like the odd but fun fact that the are both dominate and submissive at different times, as I haven't read that concept before. I'm just sad to realize that as it hasn't been finished and hasn't updated since 2007 and its 2013 now so its been 6 years so unlikely to update again, possible but unlikely. I'll still be putting this on story alert on the off chance it ever happens but I don't hold my hopes up. This was a great fic for what it has though and I don't regret clicking it :D
Alexandra Wender chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
Not you too! Why the authors of fanfiction always stop/hiatus/abandon at the best parts or the climax of the stories...
earnest-kitty chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
mpreg? really? coome on! this was lovely until that happened! duuuude!
PhantomhiveMocca chapter 8 . 10/27/2013
No , your write stlye not chaging a bit . . .
I' m actually new read your story , So Harry pregant right ? hmmm usually that's condition make him weak right ? if i dont mistake .
And yours story is amazing , actually i would say i like your stlye coz don't have many POV .
PhantomhiveMocca chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
Malfoy ? sticking tongue ?
I can't believe , you make laugh so hard
For potatoes ? really , if glare from veela in periode heat can kill someone Ron maybe should die just potatoes
I can't believe it
Oh my tears T.T
because i laugh so hard
Guest chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
Noooooooooooo! Please, please write more! We need more!
alice xolchx chapter 8 . 6/12/2013
this is...amazing!
jduke chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
*begs* please please finish this. this is really good.
DarkHorseLover chapter 8 . 3/25/2013
What?! How could you possibly drop this story like a hot potato after confirming the pregnancy? No! How am I supposed to go on living my life now? The curiosity will continue to pick at my mind until it drives me insane! Please pick this story back up, pleeeeease! (Oh my gods, why am I being so melodramatic...? O.o)
SuzukiKuma chapter 8 . 2/10/2013
Arrrggggg NOOOOO need good...can feel the withdraw...ehhhhh sadface! Please update...soon...cant wait...much longer...
NoodleNuggets chapter 8 . 2/10/2013
U gotta write more of this amazing story!
darkangel325 chapter 8 . 1/28/2013
oh no please keep this story going!
Thornesedge chapter 8 . 12/3/2012
Very entertaining! I hope that you will be able to finish this, as it could be brilliant once completed.
Rampant Id chapter 8 . 11/10/2012
Fantastic story. I was at first hesitant to start reading it as I noticed that you have not updated in over 5 years. However, I have read so many bad Veela stories by now, that I decided to give it a shot. I was not disappointed. I love your creative take on Veelas as well as how the dominant/dominant relationship might actually work. I also really like how you portray both Harry and Draco as their strong selves, without making one off them look like a simpering weakling. Your writing skills are also very good, it was a pleasure to get immersed in your story, without being jarred back into reality by grammatical mistakes that seem prevalent in many of the other stories I tried reading.
I do hope you continue the story, however, if that does not happen then at least your 8 chapters have provided me with a few hours of pleasure. I thank you for that.

- Rampant
TaraJo chapter 8 . 11/1/2012
I learned from your profile that you haven't abandoned this fic even though you haven't updated it for a long time. Thank heavens for that! This story is just too good to be left unfinished. It's refreshingly different from other Veela stories, and I'm so very much looking forward to reading more of it.