A lamp post is a tall, thin, and shiny object, which is why the person almost shrieked when they saw the bald head, because it was so shiny.
Context: I was holding my breath, waiting to see what would be in front of me, and I almost screamed when I saw his bald head, it was so shiny.
Hypothesis: I held my breath, waiting for what my gaze would fall upon, and I almost shrieked as I stared at his head, bald like a lamp post.

Is the hypothesis incorrect? (Yes, no, or unknown)?