{"action":"created","issue":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281","repository_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment","labels_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281/labels{/name}","comments_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281/comments","events_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281/events","html_url":"https://github.com/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281","id":208038762,"number":281,"title":"\"Very minor typo list\" from reviewer","user":{"login":"taylori","id":4992918,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/4992918?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori","html_url":"https://github.com/taylori","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/taylori/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"labels":[],"state":"open","locked":false,"assignee":null,"assignees":[],"milestone":null,"comments":0,"created_at":"2017-02-16T07:14:40Z","updated_at":"2017-02-16T18:01:13Z","closed_at":null,"body":"List below was provided by Trevor. I believe that some of these are style choices, not errors, such as the y-axis not starting at 0 in some plots. Other clearly should be fixed. I'm happy to take a first crack at this, but if somebody else wants to go first, that's fine too. I'm not sure how best to go about checking these off without opening a whole bunch of issues. Perhaps just open issues for the ones that seem more questionable.\r\n\r\n> Hi Ian: \r\n> \r\n> Reading through the assessment carefully, I noted all the very minor typos. Obviously none need to be corrected or make a difference to the assessment. On the other hand, maybe changing them in the auto-production of the assessment means they will be corrected in all future years! \r\n> \r\n> So do with these whatever you want! \r\n> \r\n> Trevor\r\n> \r\n> ======================================================\r\n> \r\n> p. 22 “first formed in 2011 and 2012 was the first year” should be “first formed in 2011, and 2012 was the first year”\r\n> p. 22 “Pacific Hake (or Pacific whiting” here whiting should be capitalized, presumably.\r\n> p. 24 “Pacific Hake , also referred to as Pacific whiting ,” remove the spaces before each of the commas.\r\n> p. 24 “family Merluccidae”, the family name should not be in italics.\r\n> p. 25 “((Ressler et al., 2007; Hamel et al., 2015)).” Remove the extra ().\r\n> p. 25 “as estiamted in this assessment” should be “estimated”\r\n> p. 28 “was further divided to” should perhaps be “was further divided among the”\r\n> p. 28 “on September 15 ,” delete space before comma.\r\n> p. 28 and elsewhere, no space before “N” in latitude, and no period after “N”.\r\n> p. 28 “regulations don’t” should be “regulations do not”\r\n> p. 28 “was substantially greater then in” should be “was substantially greater than in”\r\n> p. 29 “weight-at-age from fishery and survey catches,” delete the ending comma.\r\n> p. 31 “nearly equal in 2016 .” delete the space before the period.\r\n> p. 35 “782 individual ovary collections” does this mean 782 individual ovaries, or 782 sets of ovaries collected at different times?\r\n> p. 35 “relative contribute to the female spawning biomass” should be “contribution” not “contribute”\r\n> p. 35 “At-Sea hake Observer” here “Hake” should be capitalized.\r\n> p. 36 “south of 34.5 degrees latitude” in two places, should be “south of 34.5°S”\r\n> p. 41 “have surely been subject to” delete “surely”.\r\n> p. 41 The sentence starting “Selectivity has also been modeled in several ways: it has been invariant...” does not make grammatical sense.\r\n> p. 43 “the the processing” remove the duplicated “the”.\r\n> p. 46 “and to‘tune’ the 2017 base model” add a space after “to”.\r\n> p. 46 “little autocorrelation (Figures 16 and 17.” needs to end with “17).”.\r\n> p. 49 “comprising of 47%” should be “comprising 47%”\r\n> p. 49 “suggests that is one of” should be “suggests that it is one of”\r\n> p. 49 “High and low recruitment has been produced” the “has” should be “have”.\r\n> p. 49 “2-year-old fish in the 2012” should be “2-year-old fish in 2012”\r\n> p. 49 “has been below” should be “was below”\r\n> p. 50 “in all years except and 1999” a year is missing after “except”.\r\n> p. 52 “relative to 100% target” should be “relative to the 100% target”\r\n> p. 52 “The probability that the 2018 spawning biomass will be less than the 2017 spawning biomass is 82% or less for all catch levels” Perhaps better to say: “... is high, up to 82% depending on catch levels”.\r\n> p. 53 “2017 estimates at 74.2%” should perhaps be “2017 estimates are 74.2%”\r\n> p. 55 “allows the recruitments to deviated far” should be “deviate” not “deviated”.\r\n> p. 57 “The variability between models” should be “The variability among models” since there are more than two models being compared.\r\n> p. 57 “making sure that” should be “make sure that”\r\n> p. 62 “Hakes of the world (family Merlucciidae).” Here the Merlucciidae should not be italicized since it is a family name and not a genus or species.\r\n> p. 62 “an example of Atlantic cod (Gadus morhua)” species name should be in italics “Gadus morhua”\r\n> Table 5 & 14: numbers should be right aligned.\r\n> Table 15: “Log Rec. deviations” should be “Log rec. deviations”\r\n> Table 17: some columns have a space after the dash.\r\n> Table 20: final column, 27% and 24% should have a number after the decimal place.\r\n> Table 22: “2017 – 2019” no spaces on either side of the dash.\r\n> Figure 38: the upper bound of x-axis needs to be extended so that the 97.5% upper limit is shown.\r\n> Figure 39, 40, 41, 47 and most of the later plots: remove the space between 0 and the axis on the y-axis."},"comment":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/comments/280408725","html_url":"https://github.com/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281#issuecomment-280408725","issue_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/cgrandin/hake-assessment/issues/281","id":280408725,"user":{"login":"aaronmberger","id":7946234,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/7946234?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger","html_url":"https://github.com/aaronmberger","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/aaronmberger/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"created_at":"2017-02-16T18:01:13Z","updated_at":"2017-02-16T18:01:13Z","body":"Received paper doc from Michelle on minor edits/suggestions, I will incorporate these"}}
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