Suz: We really need the information to flow this time. Can you re-write it?
Dave: Sure, no problem. I thought it did flow, but...
Suz: Just making the points from one paragraph to another.
Dave: Yeah, like I thought that really did tie in well. Maybe not?
Suz: Maybe you didn't communicate all your thoughts.
Dave: True. I'll give it another read.
Suz: Okay, plus also make sure each paragraph could stand on its own.
Dave: Flow but be free standing?
Suz: Yes.
Dave: Okay, maybe that's why it didn't flow before.
Suz: Could be. Read it through for flow then split it up. Tweak where necessary?
Dave: I think that's a plan.
Suz: Great. Need it by Thursday.
Dave: Sure, no problem.
Dave will re-write the text on Suz's request by Thursday. 