Show them, with a description that’s loaded with opportunities for your reader to slip into your character’s shoes and immerse themselves in the story.
Okay, so this old cliche is so tired and worn out I really debated about whether to put it in - but despite its overuse, it’s still important. When you’re trying to hook your audience, it’s no good telling them how your character feels. Show them, with a description that’s loaded with opportunities for your reader to slip into your character’s shoes and immerse themselves in the story.