Talking to a friend or family member is a great way to get feedback on your story, especially if they are part of your target audience.
Getting an outside perspective is also an excellent way to improve your story writing techniques. Talking to a friend or family member is a great way to get feedback on your story, especially if they are part of your target audience. Another way to get feedback and help with crafting your story is by talking with a professional. A literary editor would be able to read and assess your story for publication and would be able to give you professional advice on how you could improve your story.