Here, apart from a few choice flashbacks, the action is crawlingly linear--and opaque.
At this point the action moves in a linear fashion.
The action jumps all over in a non linear fashion.
Do you write for stutter?
There is no chance that may be a problem.
Men are talking, and the third man is talking on the phone and drinking wine.
Yes, distinct ethnicity.
They design tests for compliance with regulations.
I was looking forward to the visit the next day.