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The girl is wearing a black top.
He refused to ask Starr about the negotiations.
Two lions are resting in a fenced cage.
The shack where the boy lived, was made of corrugated tin, and cardboard boxes.
A person is throwing out old newspapers.
This is the latest will there is, said Poirot.