The newly revised statement more successfully
It is more successful because it is revised.
The old statement is more useful.
There are no doors or windows on the church, and the people inside can never leave.
I agree.
A young man with a red sweatshirt on rides his bike through a busy crowd.
LSC was funding some programs in California.
A man in a car is running a red light.
Roppolo's pizzeria worker are busy at work.