His contributions in these passages are largely unobtrusive--and in a medium without a visual component, not especially bothersome--but the choice nevertheless seems eccentric.
Although his additions aren't very noticeable, they do seem a bit strange.
His additions were so bold, they seemed to take over the piece entirely.
There is a man standing near a man
They are just not demsticated or something, I guess.
A biker parting on a trail.
The man is surfing.
There was no dispute considering they were both so understanding.
A group of children watches the skater.