She felt that Hosseini was too focused on fully redeeming the protagonist in Part III and in doing so created too many unrealistic coincidences that allowed Amir the opportunity to undo his past wrongs.
Ela sentiu que Hosseini estaba demasiado concentrado en redimir completamente o protagonista na Parte III e ó facelo creou demasiadas coincidencias pouco realistas que lle deron a Amir a desfacer os erro do seu pasado.