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Marr is a keen runner, and completed the 2010 New York Marathon in a time of 3: 54: 18. Marr is a runner of Manchester City football club and has been seen attending games.
Marr is a keen runner, and completed the 2010 New York Marathon in a time of 3: 54: 18. He is a supporter of Manchester City football club and has been seen attending games.