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Soren Anders (born John T. Fischer) is an American composer, singer, record producer and instrumentalist from southern Illinois. Soren Anders is the John T. Fischer of the multi-award winning band Shimmerplanet.
Soren Anders (born John T. Fischer) is an American composer, singer, record producer and instrumentalist from southern Illinois. He is the creator of the multi-award winning band Shimmerplanet.