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Even though supplies were in transit from the Malheur agency, the Paiute people were forced to leave Camp Harney under-equipped. Five children, one woman, and an elderly man died along the way and were left unburied as they traveled.
Even though supplies were in transit from the Malheur agency, the Paiute people were forced to leave Camp Harney under-equipped. As a result, five children, one woman, and an elderly man died along the way and were left unburied as they traveled.