Correct logic errors in this paragraph
The lead character of the story, he's stunned to learn that not only will he change into a girl when he becomes excited. Somehow he failed to notice that all of the other members of his family switch sex as well.
The lead character of the story, he's stunned to learn that not only will he change into a girl when he becomes excited, but somehow he failed to notice that all of the other members of his family switch sex as well.