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Ella convinced her hesitant father that was more money than he could earn in five years of hardscrabble farming. Ella accepted and thus embarked permanently on a career as a museum and circus sideshow attraction.
Convincing her hesitant father that was more money than he could earn in five years of hardscrabble farming, Ella accepted and thus embarked permanently on a career as a museum and circus sideshow attraction.