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In 1954 Blake was the Canadian Trade Commissioner to Australia. That year, Trade Commissioner, Blake's wife, and their two sons embarked on a five-month world tour which was described as part business trip and part holiday.
In 1954 Blake was the Canadian Trade Commissioner to Australia. That year, Blake, his wife, and their two sons embarked on a five-month world tour which was described as part business trip and part holiday.