Please improve the coherence in this paragraph.
After completing the game, she reported the news to the press. She received a couple of letters from him in August from a hospital in Italy, explaining that he had not been identified for that time and was presumed dead.
After completing the game, she reported the news to the press. Then, she received a couple of letters from him in August from a hospital in Italy, explaining that he had not been identified for that time and was presumed dead.