Please fix up cohesiveness flaws in this paragraph:
Mehmed demanded that he disband his troops and pledge his loyalty to the Ottomans. Jassim bin Mohammed remained adamant in his refusal to comply with Ottomans authority.
Mehmed demanded that he disband his troops and pledge his loyalty to the Ottomans. However, Jassim bin Mohammed remained adamant in his refusal to comply with Ottoman authority.