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Given my strong academic background and my leadership experiences at university, including the completion of Manchester Leadership Programme, I believe I am a strong candidate for this position. I enclose a copy of my CV and hope very much to be invited for interview.
Given my strong academic background and my leadership experiences at the university, including the completion of the Manchester Leadership Programme, I believe I am a strong candidate for this position. I enclose a copy of my CV and hope very much to be invited for an interview.