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Savitri is unable to win the love of the child. She Savitri not get any affection from Sunder, as he is unable to get Kalpana out of his mind and thoughts.
Savitri is unable to win the love of the child, nor does she get any affection from Sunder, as he is unable to get Kalpana out of his mind and thoughts.