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Jim reviews the house. Jim takes note of the shag carpeting and an ugly painting which is apparently built into the wall, and begins to think keeping it a secret from Pam might have been a bad idea.
Reviewing the house, Jim takes note of the shag carpeting and an ugly painting which is apparently built into the wall, and begins to think keeping it a secret from Pam might have been a bad idea.