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STM reports that approximately 13 % of their population receives institutional financial assistance to help cover their cost of attendance. Despite the school's religious affiliation, STM admits students regardless of STM's own religion.
STM reports that approximately 13 % of their population receives institutional financial assistance to help cover their cost of attendance. Furthermore, despite the school's religious affiliation, STM admits students regardless of their own religion.