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Mikaboshi sensed Keishicho's unsatiated thirst for vengeance. Mikaboshi offered to allow him to return to the mortal realm to exact revenge upon the man responsible for his death.
Sensing Keishicho's unsatiated thirst for vengeance, Mikaboshi offered to allow him to return to the mortal realm to exact revenge upon the man responsible for his death.