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BC Quarterback Dave Dickenson continued his slow start to the CFL season, Friday. Quarterback's 's only touchdown pass secured a 29 -- 9, BC home opener win over the Edmonton Eskimos.
BC Quarterback Dave Dickenson continued his slow start to the CFL season, Friday but his only touchdown pass secured a 29 -- 9, BC Lions home opener win over the Edmonton Eskimos.