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Owumi went against his family's wishes. Owumi chose to follow his coach's advice, because he did not want his relatives to see his poor physical and mental state ; he felt that he could recover by playing basketball.
Going against his family's wishes, Owumi chose to follow his coach's advice, because he did not want his relatives to see his poor physical and mental state ; he felt that he could recover by playing basketball.