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An invitation by the publisher Joan Gili to translate some poems by Josep Carner led to the publication of his first book in 1962. His first book is a collection of thirty of Carner's poems in Catalan and English.
An invitation by the publisher Joan Gili to translate some poems by Josep Carner led to the publication of his first book, a collection of thirty of Carner's poems in Catalan and English, in 1962.