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Soon after transiting the Canal on 27 October, Wilkes-Barre arrived at San Diego, California, where she loaded provisions and ammunition. Following gunnery exercises off San Clemente Island, California, the warship headed for Hawaii on 10 November.
Soon after transiting the Canal on 27 October, Wilkes-Barre arrived at San Diego, California, where she loaded provisions and ammunition. Then, following gunnery exercises off San Clemente Island, Calif., the warship headed for Hawaii on 10 November.