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Emily's mother doesn't want her daughter to waste her chance. Lally (that's how Emily calls Emily's grandmother) Emily her to Emily's her education and tells a story, which happened Emily when she was 16.
Emily's mother doesn't want her daughter to waste her chance, but Lally (that's how Emily calls her grandmother) tells her to end her education and tells a story, which happened, when she was 16.