Correct cohesiveness flaws in the following paragraph:
Dietetic practices are able to alter mercury toxicity such as chewing boiled eggs or even chewing gum. Those two practices have been proved to be able to reduce mercury exposure by increasing the mercury release.
Dietetic practices are able to alter mercury toxicity such as chewing boiled eggs or even chewing gum. In fact, those two practices have been proved to be able to reduce mercury exposure by increasing the mercury release.