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The description of the requirements of a tour with the aid of climbing grade scales is therefore problematic. Such scales attempt to take into account to a greater extent as the severity of a route or its fitness requirements.
The description of the requirements of a tour with the aid of climbing grade scales is therefore problematic. As a result, such scales attempt to take into account to a greater extent as the severity of a route or its fitness requirements.