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P. Chobanyan's academic interests were also linked with the history of Armenian communities of India, Italy and Jerusalem. He discovered and published new ratifications of 17th-18th centuries about the history of Armenian, Armenian Church and Artsakh.
P. Chobanyan's academic interests were also linked with the history of Armenian communities of India, Italy and Jerusalem. He discovered and published new ratifications of 17th-18th centuries about the history of Armenia, Armenian Church and Artsakh.