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I'd fancy living in a family and not in a college or in a shared flat as it will give me the opportunity to be continuously in touch with English people, day and night; then, it is the ideal solution for me: you know I've been recently given the sack!
I fancy living with a family and not in a college or in a shared flat as it will give me the opportunity to be continuously in touch with English people, day and night; then, it is the ideal solution for me: you know I've recently been given the sack!