Change the following paragraph to be cohesive:
As a boy he intended to be a mechanic and a manufacturer of cotton bagging, similar to his father. Upon visiting his sister, diagnosed with a difficult case of scoliosis, he abandoned his earlier goals to pursue medicine.
As a boy he intended to be a mechanic and a manufacturer of cotton bagging, similar to his father. But upon visiting his sister, diagnosed with a difficult case of scoliosis, he abandoned his earlier goals to pursue medicine.