Please improve the consistency in the given paragraph.
This is a surprise to Kate, but her father didn't intend to see her there. Both clearly uncomfortable, Kate tells father Kate'll say a few words at father's retirement party his friends are throwing at The Blue Bar in a few days.
This is a surprise to Kate, but her father didn't intend to see her there. Both clearly uncomfortable, she tells him she'll say a few words at his retirement party his friends are throwing at The Blue Bar in a few days.