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John J. Collins points out the Greek linguistic play that must have existed in Artapanus' day of Moses, Thoth, and the common name Thutmosis ;. This is not why Artapanus associates Moses with Thoth.
John J. Collins points out the Greek linguistic play that must have existed in Artapanus' day of Moses, Thoth, and the common name Thutmosis ; yet this is not why Artapanus associates Moses with Thoth.