View Full Version : Sarutoshi Genki 'Tormentor of the Mist'

09-26-2009, 01:41 PM
Sarutoshi Genki 'The Tormentor'

Genki, also known as the tormentor, grew up in the village hidden in the mist. When he was a young boy, he enjoyed making fun of others, and obtained pleasure from it. People do this everyday, simply because they hate themselves, and it makes them feel better. At age 7, his actions progressed, and he slowly became less sane. He entered the ninja academy at age 8, and quickly became a genin at age 9. He then went on to train in genjutsu, rather then working on element jutsu. His sensei warned him that genjutsu took a lot of time, and genius to use. But, the boy ignored it.

At Age 11, he completed a C rank mission, and was appointed as a Chunin. He then began reading genjutsu scrolls, becoming obsessed with the idea of screwing with other minds. He trained everyday with genjutsu, improving his chakra control and movement, finally able to use it without hand signs, but with simple gestures.

At age 13, he was awarded the rank of Jonin, for his special Genjutsu abilities. He was known as the 'Tormentor of the Mist'. Any ninja who would dare attempt to combat him, would be held in trace for days on end. His abilities were arguably godlike, to be able to destroy one's mind within seconds, is unimaginable. He then went on to complete various A rank missions, and select S-rank missions with ease.

After years of working with the ninja military, he decided to retire, at age 16. His best friend and long time rival Kokechi, took this as disrespect and called him on it. Genki was emotionally unstable, and his sanity was thinning. When the fight turned physical, Genki finally lost control. He grabbed his friend and looked directly in his eyes, with pure hatred and bloodlust, sucking the life right out of him. Once he had realized what he'd done, he ran off.

Ever since that day, Genki has trained his new genjutsu abilities on the road, constantly defeating S-rank ninjas and improving his speed, strength and the Tysugan.

He forever lives in fear of that day, the day he lost his best friend, and his soul, to the Tysugan.

Tysugan: An S-rank Jutsu, the eyes become black with purple pupils spinning, in a hypnotic state. If anyone should look directly into the eyes, their entire life essence would be sucked directly out and transferred into Genki's eyes within seconds, sharing a fate with many others.. to be endlessly tortured until the day Genki can no longer see.

A story by [Shikamaru]

09-26-2009, 02:49 PM
Nobody liked it eh? Oh well.

09-26-2009, 03:01 PM
;1279287']Nobody liked it eh? Oh well.
that was amazing...but my character is bettere..JK!! your character would most likely beat me in a fight.

09-26-2009, 05:02 PM
Oh that's not my character, that would be insane, he's way too overpowered. He's just someone I decided to make up, because I thought It'd be pretty fun.