Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Departed

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edit The Departed

Humour: 0 There isn't any yet
Concept: 3 Ah, there's always room for an article about a decent film, but you have to have an idea to work with, which this piece doesn't. Yet.
Prose and formatting: 2 Little to none.
Images: 3 Well there are some, and they are relevant, but they're randomly plonked in, and there's nothing funny about them.
Miscellaneous: 1 This is gonna need a lot of work.
Final Score: 9 See comments below.
Reviewer: --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 09:35, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Pee Review isn't the place to come if you have no ideas. If you are starting an article, do it in your userspace (click your username in the top right of the screen, then in the browser address box, add /The_Departed and hit enter, then create the page there. This is your own personal sandbox where you can create what you like, and play with it until it is a decent article.

I recommend getting adopted by an established user. Go to your userpage and put {{Adoptme}} on it, then wait for a friendly soul to come along and take you on. You can then ask them for all sorts of help, including moving the article to your userspace for you so you can work on it without fear of deletion.

Also, this is a list of n00b friendly users - pop a question on their talk pages, and they'll try to help you out.

Finally, pay attention to that nice template Tom Mayfair left on your talk page, particularly HTBFANJS and Uncyclopedia:Beginner's Guide to Being an Uncyclopedian. They really do help.

Good luck! --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 09:35, 4 October 2007 (UTC) I need help working on The Departed, I need more ideas

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