Reviews for Blessed
GenetiX23 chapter 9 . 1/17
You probably could use some therapy, friend.
Feeb chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
There's no way that the weasleys or Hermione could survive an attack from even a sixth year Tom. They should have been terminated with extreme prejudice. Leave writing for people with brains.
Sleep Patterned chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
Amazing. Hermione's death was so satisfying, and the way Voldemort kicked it gave me a chuckle. You walked right on that line between absurd and complete crack without going too far, congratulations. If it wasn't four in the morning I'd check out your other stuff but that will have to wait until tomorrow. Good work on this though, it was thoroughly enjoyable.
Oculus Lupus chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Man, I'd pay good money to see something similar to this. Well, not money, but I'll review the fuck out of you if you ever planned something similar.
excelsia chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
oh yes, oh yes! this was awesome :) briliant, very gruesome, pretty interesting. with a shitty summary though. no wonder the low number of reviews too. .. seems you just can't attract people to reading your stories
ramza1212 chapter 9 . 10/6/2011
I don't know that you'll ever actually get this or not. I just wanted to say thank you. this story was better than most of the things I've read on this site, and much better than anything I ever contributed. the only real question that I had throughout this read was with your epilogue. Up until that point, there was an implied immortality to both Harry and Voldemort. While the final battle between Voldemort and Harry was interesting, it destroyed the sense I had for this fic. I honestly thought that an epilogue to this would consist of Harry and Voldemort standing among the wastes of some great city for the final showdown, rather than an actual fight.
Thaumologist chapter 9 . 8/5/2011
I enjoyed reading this, and thought if you intended a slightly humourous crack!fic, you succeeded.

However, the timelines were screwy - Harry spends two months getting his hand built? And NOTHING really happens back in England?

The lack of scene break lines was frustrating. As was the sudden characters 'developments'. Hermione seemed to just go evil AND mental over coffee, and Voldemort acted weird at times.

This wasn't a struggle to read by any means, and I sniggered a few times throughout, but I wouldn't read again.

Didn't notice any technical problems - your spelling and grammar seemed fine, except occasional moved speech marks (which are REALLY common on . Is it a site issue, I wonder?)


Lord Blood chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
what the fuck? I stopped reading a few paragraphs in. "Excellent, as always, Wormtail." i repeat, what the fuck?
Dorian Windslasher chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
While I do have to give you credit for great writing and creativity, I have some complaints.

First off, Voldemort seems less frightening when lowering himself to something as human as appreciating the weather or swearing.

Secondly, he trusts in nobody but himself. That includes clones of himself. They're obviously nowhere as strong as he is or Hermione and all the Weasley's would've been dead in a heartbeat, but it's still a risk.

The scene at the burrow was spectacular and for once brought out the nicer qualities of Ron.

Hermione's smart and not a slouchy dueler. But as much as she benefits from her intelligence, she also overthinks things. And it's one thing to know spells and another to use them in a combat situation. In my opinion, she did too well in the duel with the horcrux thingy.

The twist on her character could be interesting, though.

But I think it'd be far better if it was brought on slowly as opposed to a sudden and unexplained change.
Separ chapter 9 . 4/5/2011
Wow, a really unique and great story!
deleted2012 chapter 9 . 12/30/2010
I love it! Not meant to laugh? I was cackling madly throughout! :)
Tenages chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
If you were curious as to exactly where this story jumped the shark, it was very early on. The exact point was at the end of Chapter 1 in fact. Hermione would not have lasted five seconds in a duel against the Dark Lord's Horcux. She absolutely could not have dueled him to a draw. Go back to your fantasies of pleasuring the beaver and cease writing.

Fail story is fail.
cbq chapter 9 . 11/26/2010
This is a totally bizarre story. Thank you for entertaining me with it :-)
Kitten118 chapter 9 . 11/17/2010
This truly was an amazing story and is most Lilly my favorite out of any I've read!
Zuul chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
I am enjoying the story so far; "original" ideas, decent grammar/spelling, etc.

I am confused about some of the characters. Semi-competent Ron who thinks before he acts? Slightly manipulative Ginny? Evil Hermione?

Ron can become a competent character who thinks before reacting, yet how this is possible is lacking in this story. What caused Ron to change?

The same with Ginny. While Ginny is slowly becoming more than a non-character at this point, her character has changed drastically in the short space with the end of the term and the quidditch scene. Again, I can see how this change can happen, but there is no precedence for it in this story.

Frankly, the idea of an evil Hermione is hilarious. I just can't believe it. It lacks credulity. Hermione is a follower, not a leader. Could she be swayed by silver-tongued Riddle, sure. Is that enough for her to abandon her "friends" and the Light? I would say not likely.

I am assuming, possibly incorrectly, that this story begins after the second term of year six with everything before coinciding with canon. If you were to show transition stages between those of canon book six and this piece of fanfiction, the characters would regain some of the believability that they currently lack. The changes are too drastic to be accepted without some form of explanation.

Other than that, great job and I look forward to finishing this story up in the next couple days.
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