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Improve the grammar of this text: It also tasted the same as needlefishes snacks I've eaten, but the bones bothered me.

It also tasted the same as needlefish snacks I've eaten, but the bones bothered me.

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Fix coherence in this sentence: In Cassius Dio's version, at first, Bato the Daesitiate had very few followers. However, once he defeated the Roman force sent against him, more people joined him.

In Cassius Dio's version, at first, Bato the Daesitiate had very few followers. Once Bato defeated the Roman force sent against Bato, more people joined Bato.

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Simplification: Today, as always, the trip from one compartment to another took two hours.

Today, as usual, it took him two hours to go from one department to the next.

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Improve the coherence of the text: This is generally not the case with most devices described as mechanical amplifiers ; all the energy is provided by the original signal and there is no power amplification. A lever can amplify the displacement of a signal, but the force is proportionately reduced.

This is generally not the case with most devices described as mechanical amplifiers ; all the energy is provided by the original signal and there is no power amplification. For instance a lever can amplify the displacement of a signal, but the force is proportionately reduced.

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Make this text more neutral: ruut veenhoven claimed that social security payments do not seem to add to happiness.

ruut veenhoven showed that social security payments do not seem to add to happiness.

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Make the sentence simple: It may take time to empty the cache.

Flushing the cache may take some time.

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: Apart from that, it has been a good practice for speaking.

Apart from that, it has been good practice for speaking.

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Rewrite this with simpler wording: History The first dance school was opened in 1661 in Paris, France.

The first ballet dance academy was the Academie Royale de Danse (Royal Dance Academy), opened in Paris in 1661.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: Through this many people would have access to mobile banking and in addition to that it makes money available so it can be used in shops.

Through this, many people would have access to mobile banking and, in addition to that, it makes money available so it can be used in shops.

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Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Lordship Lane North Yorkshire Lordship Lane is a street in Selby and Wistow.

Lordship Lane, a street in Selby and Wistow, North Yorkshire

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Remove unsourced opinions from this text: revisionist interpretations of the evidence

other interpretations of the evidence

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Make this text less biased: by their external physical appearence they resemble africans with dark skin and sometimes tightly coiled hair.

superficially they resemble africans with dark skin and sometimes tightly coiled hair.

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Make the sentence simple: We'll track down our little sorceress together.

Together, we will track our little witch.

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Improve the grammaticality: In the morning, we kept the Sabbath Day, we sang anthen and read the Bible.

In the morning, we kept the Sabbath Day; we sang hymns, and read the Bible.

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Make this sentence more neutral: good illustrative video about ip multicast at cisco.

illustrative video about ip multicast at cisco.

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Make this formal: I would say you should forget about him, why keep him in your mind in another relationship?

forget him, y would he live that relationship?

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Improve the grammaticality: The family bonding in most western society is very weak and the young generation does not really have a sense of filial piety in their head.

Family bonding in most western societies is very weak, and the young generation does not really have a sense of filial piety in their minds.

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Improve the grammaticality: The sum up the above argument, we should take some measures and have a positive attitude.

The sum up the above argument, we should take some measures and have positive attitude.

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Fix coherence in this text: In 1940 the sentence was cancelled, his case was put under further investigation. Eventually he was executed by shooting on October 16, 1941.

In 1940 the sentence was cancelled, his case was put under further investigation, and eventually he was executed by shooting on October 16, 1941.

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Improve the consistency of the text: She argues for rationality, pointing out that Burke's system would lead to the continuation of slavery, simply. System had been an ancestral system.

She argues for rationality, pointing out that Burke's system would lead to the continuation of slavery, simply because it had been an ancestral tradition.

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Remove non-neutral points of view: ross also appeared on backing vocals, and appeared in its music video.

ross also appeared on backing vocals, and appeared in its unusual music video.

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Write a simpler version for the sentence: I wanted him to be my husband.

It was my intention to make him my husband.

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Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Wondering about his strange request, she decides to find a way to cheer him up, and in the process gains another konpeito.

She wonders about his strange request. She decides to find a way to cheer him up, and in the process gains another konpeito.

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Fix coherence in this sentence: His parents are shocked to see them. A devastated Rabiya goes to apologize to her brother and sister-in-law. But they say her that it is not her fault as Shavez always wanted to marry Asma.

His parents are shocked to see them. A devastated Rabiya goes to apologize to her brother and sister-in-law. Parents say her that it is not her fault as Shavez always wanted to marry Asma.

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Use simpler wording: So let's split up when we get inside.

So after we go inside, we split up.

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Fix all grammatical errors: Hence, with these schemes, it is proven that the elderly in Singapore are given top priority in the community.

Hence, with these schemes, it is proven that elderly in Singapore are given top priority in the community.

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Formalize: You should create a Myspace account, cut your hair, and wear emo band t-shirts.

- get a myspace - cut your hair - wear emo band t-shirts

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Formalize this text: I do not care for him.

I dont really care for him ..

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Make the sentence simple: You're sounding good, you're looking good, you're doing everything you should.

You sounds good, you look good, you do everything you're supposed to do.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: What is, are your favorite books?

What is your favorite books?

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Rewrite this sentence in a simpler manner: The ban covers 211 games -- the rest of this season and the entire 2014 campaign.

The suspension period runs through the rest of this season and all of 2014.

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Use simpler wording: If you don't come to your senses, I will never speak to you again!

I'll never talk to you again, if you're not coming to your senses!

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Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Older sources use the Julian Calendar, where the new year starts on Lady Day, 25 March, whereas more modern sources use the Gregorian calendar.

Older sources use the Julian Calendar, where the new year starts on Lady Day, 25 March,. More modern sources use the Gregorian calendar.

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Formalize the sentence: He is not attractive.

I think he is not cute

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: He did like his job but as we all know, sometimes people suddenly feel they have to change something.

He did like his job, but, as we all know, sometimes people suddenly feel they have to change something.

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Make the sentence clear: Speaking to The Guardian on condition of anonymity, an official with close links to the Iranian Government in Iran said that he believed the Bid Kaneh explosion was "part of the covert war against Iran, led by Israel".

An " official with close links to the Iranian Government in Iran said that he believed the Bid Kaneh explosion was "part of the covert war against Iran, led by Israel".

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Simplify this text: He had seldom seen Klara for several months.

For some months he had seen very little of Clara.

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Fix grammar errors: Although help is given, it is not encouraged for the aged to continuously be reliant on that.

Although help is given, it is not encouraged for the aged to continuously be reliant on it.

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Remove POV in this text: lebanese-syrian border under the control of the syrian regime and its lebanese allies

lebanese-syrian border under the control of the syrian government and its lebanese allies

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Make this sound more formal: but he is more finacially stable and is heading the right direction in life.

His finances are secure and he remains focused on his goals in life.

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Make this more neutral: the metalcore band killswitch engage covered the title track for the kerrang!

the metalcore band killswitch engage brilliantly covered the title track for the kerrang!

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Make the text more logical: The Russian edition was sold to RAJI (Russian American Jews for Israel) in 2004, although initially it kept the name.

The Russian edition was sold to RAJI (Russian American Jews for Israel) in 2004. Initially edition kept the name.

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Make the sentence simple: At least you would have been happy once in your life.

For once in your life, you'd be happy.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: My husband and I often go to Toulouse to visit Azucena.

My husband and me, often go to Toulouse to visit Azucena.

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Remove non-neutral POV: ball-tampering incident and banning

ball-tampering crisis and banning

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Formalize the sentence: Like do they always go for looks?

Are they always attracted to just looks?

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Write less informally: why would you want to.... shes a beast

You should leave her alone.

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Fix grammaticality: Though the capital cost of the VHTR is high, the operational cost is comparatively less since the VHTR is highly efficient at higher temperatures and hence is a good solution to get cheaper electricity.

Though the capital cost of the VHTR is high the operational cost is comparatively less since the VHTR is highly efficient at higher temperature and hence is a good solution to get cheaper electricity.

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Fix grammar in the sentence: Another aspect that can help in easing the problem is the industrial development aspect in a country.

Another aspect that can help in easing the problem is the industrial development of a country.

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Write a better readable version of the sentence: After 160,000 people have had their power restored, 500,000 people are without power.

After 160,000 people have had their power restored, 500,000 others are still without power.

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Make this sentence more readable: After a new coat of paint and a little work the S.S. Hurricane Camille could look a lot better. You can't expect something thats survived two hurricanes, the latter one of the worst on record not to be a little beat up. The dents and scratches just add to its charm.

After a new coat of paint and some repairs could make the boat much more appealing.

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Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: That woman knows how to put a smile on a kid's face.

That woman knows how to put a smile on kid's face.

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Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The work of Ralph Bulmer in New Guinea, culminating in his collaboration with Ian Saem Majnep in writing Birds of My Kalam Country (1977), set a new standard for ethnoornithological research. This book has deservedly become a classic of modern ethnoornithology.

The work of Ralph Bulmer in New Guinea, culminating in his collaboration with Ian Saem Majnep in writing Birds of My Kalam Country (1977), set a new standard for ethnoornithological research, and this book has deservedly become a classic of modern ethnoornithology.

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Rewrite this sentence in a simpler manner: The song was # 75 on the Billboard Hot 100 year end chart of 2000.

Its video made MTV's Total Request Live briefly, and it managed to chart on the Billboard Hot 100 in the summer of 2000, going up to No. 20 on the chart.

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Rewrite this with simpler wording: You can find people in Italy to do almost any kind of thing.

In Italy you'll find people who operate almost anything.

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Rewrite in a more formal manner: No, it would be too awkward.

I don't think it's too terribly weird.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: My English is very poor, but I would like to speak to anyone with it.

My English is very poor, but I would like to speak anyone by it.

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Fix grammatical errors: The downside could be the waiting time to eat, because all the dishes are prepared at the time of the customers do the order.

The downside could be the waiting time to eat because all the dishes are prepared at the time the customers make the order.

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: Here I come to express my thoughts about what has been happening during these past weeks in the reception of the building.

Here I come to express my thoughts about what have been happening during these past weeks at the reception of the building.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Parents often compare their children to others, and this also plays a role in this case.

Parents often compare child to others also plays a role in this case.

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Fix errors in this text: Looking forward to hearing from you soon

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Make the sentence simple: As of today, Hebrew has been the only dead language that had been made into a living language again.

Hebrew is the only Canaanite language still spoken, and the only truly successful example of a revived dead language.

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Simplify this paragraph: The members of this group are known as catnip or catmint because of their famous effect on cats -- nepeta pleasantly stimulates cats ' pheromonic receptors, typically resulting in temporary euphoria.

The members of this group are known as catnip or catmint because of their famed effect on cats.

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Remove grammar mistakes: I don't know what should write, but to continue is important!

I don't know what I should write, but to continue is important!

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Make the sentence fluent: Why he is nude?

Why is he nude?

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Make the text more consistent: The album was particularly aimed at the US market

The album was particularly aimed at the US market: the title is an American idiom rather than a British one, although it received positive reviews in the U.K.

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Fix grammaticality: Since I worked twice as a group instructor at a local summer camp, I think that I am well-equipped to deal with 8-12 year old children from the experience I mentioned.

Since I have worked twice as a group instructor at a local summer camp, I think that I am well-equipped to deal with 8-12-year-old children from the experience I mentioned.

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Fix grammar: In the technological age, since independent innovation is very important to a nation's development, society needs people with innovative talent.

In the technological age, since independent innovation is very important to a nation's development, society needs the people with innovative talent.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Many people in Thailand have nickname because their firstnames are too long

Many people in Thailand have a nickname because their first names are too long.

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Simplify this paragraph: I don't think I can accept a proposalthis early in the season.

Well, I guess this early in the season, I just can't accept any idea.

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Rewrite this sentence for simplicity: If I go back, I will not forgive myself.

I can't forgive myself when I go back.

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Use simpler wording: And I've felt God's love within my heart since that day.

From that day on, I have felt God's love in my heart.

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Write more formally: It is exceptional and is the cause of my 25 pound muscle gain due to weightlifting.

its great i actually got into weightlifting cuz of his show and gained 25 pounds of pure muscle

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Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Prognosis is bleak for patients with malignant chondroblastomas that are resistant to surgery, radiation, and chemotherapy. Patients with resectable metastases have survived for several years following diagnosis.

Prognosis is bleak for patients with malignant chondroblastomas that are resistant to surgery, radiation, and chemotherapy. However, patients with resectable metastases have survived for several years following diagnosis.

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Remove points of view: his work partly inspired the popular economics book freakonomics.

his work partly inspired the pop-conomics book freakonomics.

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Formalize this sentence: Do younger women see 38 yr old guys and think no way he's old!??

Women do not see 38 year old me as old.

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Remove non-neutral POV: the album incorporated darker tones, rap rock, r&b, and deep storytelling.

the album incorporated darker tones, rap rock, r&b, and storytelling.

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Improve the grammar of this text: This problem deters many countries from pursuing the SFR model further, but if they manage to build an SFR plant, the profit that comes from building one will cover the capital cost in just several years.

This problem repels many countries to pursue the SFR model further but if they managed to build an SFR plant, the profit that comes from building one will cover the capital cost just in several years.

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Write in a formal manner: It is going to be amazing.

It is going to be a classic!

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Remove non-neutral POVs: kate moss - english supermodel

kate moss - english model

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Rewrite more formally: Like you said that would ROCK!!!

As you said, that would be amazing.

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Simplify this text: He studied at Harvard University (BA 1969, MA 1972).

He studied music at Harvard University.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: In this report I am going to talk about how in my town take care of the environment.

In this report, I am going to talk about how my town takes care of the environment.

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Fix grammar: As a result, better healthcare services and facilities are created, and they have effectively reduced healthcare costs and elderly dependency.

As a result, better healthcare services and facilities are created and have effectively reduced healthcare cost and elderly dependency.

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Remove points of view: lazio had already been endorsed by mike long, the conservative party leader.

lazio had already been endorsed by mike long, the influential conservative party leader.

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Rewrite more formally: I don't want a simple answer...like it tastes salty...explain that to me.thats a homework question ppl

I don't want a simple answer, I need it explained to me.

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Write a simpler version for the sentence: He was elected to one term in the House of Representatives.

In 1846 Lincoln was elected to one term in the U.S. House of Representatives.

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Write more formally: She is a disgusting woman, and she should be ashamed of herself.

she is a sick woman and shame on her sorry

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Clarify this paragraph: constructs the storage model of information, and simulate the attribute information precessing process in one of the attribute spaces, interprets how the relations which represented by "Be", "Of", "Have", and so on are embodied in the information storage data structures and the corresponding data reading modes can be further divided into the data description task, the data verification task, and the data search task, according to task types represented by these sentences...

constructs the storage model of information, and simulate the attribute information precessing process in one of the attribute spaces, interprets how the relations which represented by "Be", "Of", "Have", and so on are embodied in the information storage data structures and the corresponding data reading modes, reclassifies the sentences types from the perspective of task types and data reading modes. Then, simulated the understanding process (the information processing process) on a dialogue example. Finally, the author summarizes the basic conditions of understanding and gives out the definition of understanding from a personal point of view. The study in this paper provides a practical, theoretical basis and research methods for NLU.It also can be applied in large-scale, multi-type information processing in the artificial intelligence (AI) area.

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Make this text more neutral: this is a list of some of the more noteworthy marian apparitions.

this is a list of some of the more publicized marian apparitions.

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Make this more formal: Yo Momma so fat, she can't go see Led Zeppelin anymore because she broke the Stairway To Heaven!

Rudely, he joked that the individual's mother was obese and thus, could not see Led Zeppelin as she would break the Stairway to Heaven.

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Make the sentence simpler: He knew where Hakan had gone, so he set off after him.

Knowing where Hakan had gone, he followed.

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Make this easier to understand: It is the second in The Chronicles of Narnia film series from Walden Media, following The Chronicles of Narnia

It is part of the Chronicles of Narnia movie series.

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Make this text less biased: the punishment is carried out even if the thief repents.

the punishment is imposed even if the thief repents.

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Formalize the text: Why are you wondering that?

HOW COME YOUR WONDERING THAT QUESTION.

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Fix coherence: His presumed successor was Liberal deputy leader William McMahon. On 18 December, the Country Party leader and Deputy Prime Minister John McEwen announced that if deputy leader were named the new Liberal leader, he and his party would not serve under William McMahon.

His presumed successor was Liberal deputy leader William McMahon. However, on 18 December, the Country Party leader and Deputy Prime Minister John McEwen announced that if McMahon were named the new Liberal leader, he and his party would not serve under him.

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Make the text more coherent: Georgia defeated Auburn 24-21 to secure a spot in their first SEC Championship Game. The Georgia defeated Arkansas 30-3 to win Georgia's SEC Championship Game Championship since 1982.

Georgia defeated Auburn 24-21 to secure a spot in their first SEC Championship Game. The Bulldogs defeated Arkansas 30-3 to win their first SEC Championship since 1982.

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Neutralize this sentence: following work by hainfield et al.

following seminal work by hainfield et al.

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Write a simpler version for the sentence: I haven't found anything, to be completely honest.

To be quite honest, I have not found anything.

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Fix coherence in the sentence: Note that this definition uses rainfall only. Long-term records are widely available across most of Australia.

Note that this definition uses rainfall only because long-term records are widely available across most of Australia.

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